Taiwansoninlaw: 2009-04-04, Paragraph #1

Story #1, Off to School, Paragraph

I turned off the alarm.

I got up out of bed.

Put on my jeans and my T-shirt.

I had a glass of milk.

Got my schoolbag.

Run to the bus stop.

Look at my feet.

I’ve got my slippers on.

Shout, “Oh, No!”

I turned off the alarm and I got up out of bed. I put on my jeans and my T-shirt. I had a glass of milk. I got my schoolbag. I Run[RS1] to the bus stop. Later, I Look[RS2] at my feet and saw that I’ve got my slippers on. I Shout[RS3] , “Oh, No!”

[RS1]ran

[RS2]looked

[RS3]shouted

Story #1, Off to School, Paragraph

This morning I turn on the alarm clock and got out of my bed. Than I put on my jeans and shirt and drank a glass of milk. Got my schoolbag and ran to the bus stop when I look my feet I get my slippers on. And I shout ’’Oh no”

This morning, I turn[RS1] on[RS2] the alarm clock and got out of my bed. Than[RS3] I put on my jeans and shirt and drank a glass of milk. [RS4] G[RS5] ot my schoolbag and ran to the bus stop. when[RS6] I look[RS7] my feet I get[RS8] my slippers [RS9] on. And I shout[RS10] “Oh no”.

[RS1]turned

[RS2]off

[RS3]Then,

[RS4]I

[RS5]g

[RS6]When

[RS7]looked

[RS8]saw that

[RS9]were still

[RS10]shouted

Story #1, Off to School, Paragraph

Turn off my alarm clock and I got out my bed. I put on my jeans and T-shirt. Have a glass of milk. After got my schoolbag and run to the bus stop. Later I look my feet and I have got my slippers on. I shout,“Oh no!”

I turned off my alarm clock and I got out [RS1] my bed. I put on my jeans and T-shirt. I Have[RS2] a glass of milk. After, [RS3] got my schoolbag and run[RS4] to the bus stop. Later, I look[RS5] at my feet and I have got[RS6] my slippers on. I shout[RS7] ,“Oh no!”

[RS1]of

[RS2]had

[RS3]I

[RS4]ran

[RS5]looked

[RS6]saw that I still had

[RS7]shouted

Story #1, Off to School, Paragraph

I turn of the alarm clock and get out of bed, put on my jeans and my T-shirt, have a glass of milk and get your schoolbag, run to the bus stop. Look at your feet, you’ve got your slippers on, Shout “oh no!”

I turned of [RS1] the alarm clock and get[RS2] out of bed., I put on my jeans and my T-shirt, and drank have a glass of milk. I and get[RS3] your[RS4] schoolbag,[RS5] run[RS6] to the bus stop. I[RS7] Look[RS8] at your[RS9] feet, you’ve got your[RS10] slippers on., I shouted “Oh no!”