L&R Book B, Part 2, Appendix#1, Composition #8, Page 92
One day, Barney and Fred went to the beach together.
They went surfing in the ocean.
They enjoy surfing very much.
Suddenly, they saw like a shark or a whale in the sea.
Barney and Fred were very afraid.
Actually it was neither a whale, nor a shark, but dolphins.
Soon they were playing with dolphins.
One day, Barney and Fred went to the beach together. They went surfing in the ocean. They enjoy surfing very much. Suddenly, they saw [RS1] like a shark or a whale in the sea[RS2] . Barney and Fred were very afraid. Actually it was neither a whale, nor a shark, but dolphins.[RS3] Soon they were playing with the dolphins.
[RS1]the fin of
[RS2]water
L&R Book B, Part 2, Appendix#1, Composition #8, Page 92
One day, Barney and Fred ran to the sea and surf.
When they were surfing, they saw a triangle on the sea.
They thought it was shark’s fin.
They were very scared, in the time Fred fell in the water.
Two dolphins jumped out to the sea.
And they were very happy
One day, Barney and Fred ran to the sea and surf. When they were surfing, they saw a triangle on[RS1] the sea. They thought it was shark’s fin. They were very[RS2] scared that, in the time Fred fell into the water. Luckily, two dolphins jumped out to[RS3] the sea with Fred! And They were very happy.
L&R Book B, Part 2, Appendix#1, Composition #8, Page 92
One day, Barney and Fred went to the beach. They are fun with surf. After, Barney and Fred are watching a big blue fin, they are very afraid the fin. And Barney is fall down. In fact the fin is dolphin fin. In the end there are many dolphins play with Barney and Fred.
One day, Barney and Fred went to the beach. They are[RS1] fun with surf[RS2] . After, Barney and Fred are watching[RS3] a big blue fin,[RS4] t[RS5] hey are[RS6] very afraid the fin. And Barney is fall[RS7] down.[RS8] In fact, the fin is[RS9] a dolphin fin. In the end, there are many dolphins play[RS10] with Barney and Fred.
L&R Book B, Part 2, Appendix#1, Composition #8, Page 92
Today is a sunny day. Barney and Fred are together going to the beach. They were going to surfing on the ocean. They were play to so happy. Barney was to fall from his surfboard and under the water. What good timing! There are two dolphins to save him out to from the sea.
Today is[RS1] a sunny day. Barney and Fred are together going[RS2] to the beach [RS3] . They were going to surfing on the ocean. They were play to so happy [RS4] . [RS5] Barney was to fall[RS6] from[RS7] his surfboard and [RS8] under the water. What good timing! There are t[RS9] wo dolphins to saved him. They lifted him out to from[RS10] the sea.
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