Composition Submission #1

Today at 7 o’clock, Jane eats a banana, an orange and an apple for her breakfast. At 12 o’clock, Jane eats a bowl of salad and a bottle of juice, other two boys one is reading a book another eats a bread. Later, she has energy, but other two boys are tired.

Today at 7 o’clock in the morning, Jane eats a banana, an orange and an apple for her breakfast. At 12 o’clock, Jane eats a bowl of salad and drinks a bottle of juice. There are two other boys with her. One is reading a book and the other is eating some bread. Later in class, Jane has energy, but other two boys are tired.