Sunday, February 8, 2009

Composition Submission #3

Jane was ate apple, banana and orange at the 7:00 AM . In the midday she was ate salad and juice for lunch. She is difference her classmates, because her classmates eat a bread. In the afternoon, Jane is vary vitality to having a class, and she’s classmates are to drowse.


Jane ate an apple, a banana and an orange at 7:00 AM (for breakfast). At noon, she had a salad and juice for lunch. She is different from her classmates because her classmates ate bread. In the afternoon, Jane had lots of vitality during class while her classmates were very drowsy.

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