2009-03-14, #3 Sun Tan, I

(O) It’s a hot day.

(O) Go to the beach.

(X) Put sun block on your face, arm, leg, shoulder and body.

(O) Put sun lotion on your face, arms, legs, back and chest.

(O) Put your blanket on the sand and lie down.

(O) Put your towel on the sand and lie down.

(X) You get to sleep.

(O) You go to sleep.

(O) You wake up.

(X) Than your arm, leg, shoulder and your face.

(O) Touch your arms, your legs, your back and your face.

(X) They have sunbrut.

(O) They hurt.

(O) Say, “Stupid me!”

 

Sample Paragraph

 

It was a hot day so I went to the beach. I put sun lotion on my face, arms, legs, back and chest. Then I put my towel on the sand and lay down. Soon I fell asleep. Later when I woke up, I touched my arms, legs, back, and face. Oh, they hurt! I said to myself, “Stupid me!”