2009-03-14, #3 Sun Tan, W

(O) It’s a hot day.

(O) Go to the beach.

(X) Put sun lotion on your face, arm, lag, back and chest.

(O) Put sun lotion on your face, arms, legs, back and chest.

(O) Put your towel on the sand and lie down.

(O) You go to sleep.

(O) You wake up.

(X) Touch your arm, your lag, your back and your face.

(O) Touch your arms, your legs, your back and your face.

(X) There hot.

(O) They hurt.

(X) So, “stupid me!”

(O) Say, “Stupid me!”

 

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It was a hot day so I went to the beach. I put sun lotion on my face, arms, legs, back and chest. Then I put my towel on the sand and lay down. Soon I fell asleep. Later when I woke up, I touched my arms, legs, back, and face. Oh, they hurt! I said to myself, “Stupid me!”