(O) It’s a hot day.
(O) Go to the beach.
(X) Put sun lotion on your face, hand, foot, back and chest.
(O) Put sun lotion on your face, arms, legs, back and chest.
(X) Put your towel on the sandy and lie down.
(O) Put your towel on the sand and lie down.
(X) You get to sleep.
(O) You go to sleep.
(X) You walk up.
(O) You wake up.
(X) Touch your hand, your foot, your back and your face.
(O) Touch your arms, your legs, your back and your face.
(O) That’s hot.
(O) They hurt.
(O) So, “Stupid me”.
(O) Say, “Stupid me!”
Sample Paragraph
It was a hot day so I went to the beach. I put sun lotion on my face, arms, legs, back and chest. Then I put my towel on the sand and lay down. Soon I fell asleep. Later when I woke up, I touched my arms, legs, back, and face. Oh, they hurt! I said to myself, “Stupid me!”
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